Feedback on Rough Cut ( Post 50 )


I sent the link of my rough cut to some of my peers to get feedback on how to improve. Here are screenshots of what they said:


















































The feedback was generally positive, people seemed to enjoy the concept and thought it worked well. However, when going back to my video the exposure needs to be worked on, as I expected, and people seemed to think some of the performance elements were out of time so I need to revisit a few clips to rectify that.

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